The Pumpkin Dragons

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The Pumpkin Dragons

Well here one of My short stories that uploaded for a test read.

http://www.ajb2k3.co.uk/Writtin/The%20Pumpkin%20Dragons.pdf

If you spot anything that is not to Oxford English, please point it out but more importantly, Let me know what you think!

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One comment on “The Pumpkin Dragons

  1. That was a rather enjoyable read. It flowed smoothly and was set in a good pace, the story, to me, felt neither rushed nor unnecessarily lengthy. I enjoyed reading it and found once I started reading that I had to read all the way through until I knew what happened. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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